You need much more here and you should change the font choice. It should not be blocky bold or upper case. Make sure you fully explain [in your own words] the ideology behind Bigg Issue. Also write about the cost, distribution and target market. Do they really sell magazines to homeless people? Could you add Curran & seaton? This is very basic and could be much better. Only Level 1 work here Adam.
You need much more here and you should change the font choice. It should not be blocky bold or upper case. Make sure you fully explain [in your own words] the ideology behind Bigg Issue. Also write about the cost, distribution and target market. Do they really sell magazines to homeless people? Could you add Curran & seaton? This is very basic and could be much better. Only Level 1 work here Adam.
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